Shorter than the Second Hand(Song Title)

[Joel(BandN-Mechanism)]

This is a song I wrote, and I ran a poor man's copyright on it, so I could show it to you guys and see what you think.

Shorter than the second hand

It's a boy
Look at those feet
So much innocence
Nothing could ever take him down

*Where has the time gone?
Where did we go wrong?
Little boy full of light
The morning's gone
Here comes the night

It's a boy
Look at those feet
So nice and so neat
Listening to what he needs

Take a look at those feet
Scarred and bruised from the chase
Running from the truth and what he needs
What happened to the innocence?*

It's a boy
You fall to your knees
Where are those feet?
Pray to God bring him home

My God
Bring him home*

It's a boy
Look at those feet
Weary from the long walk home
There he stands for a moment
Until he falls to his knees

Welcome back Home
Thank God, he's home

**Time has come and gone
Thank God he's come home
Little boy full of light
The morning's come
There goes the night

[Mandi]

That looks really good. Keep up the good work. God bless you and your work.

[Samantha]

Awesome!! I think its great. May God bless you in all that you do.

[Joel(BandN-Mechanism)]

Well, thanks! I wrote this one last year, actualy got my bro to come up with a tune for it, lol.